Monday, March 30, 2009

55 word Fiction

‘It’s all hogwash,’ she thought while wearing her satin gown.

Suddenly she saw his reflection in the mirror. His hands wrapped her tightly around her tiny waist. Her heart palpitated and her body froze with fear.

She shivered and remembered her aunt’s advice. ‘Om bhur…,’ she chanted and the spirit, thankfully, left the haunted closet.



I picked up this tag from D's, and its awesome. Write a post in 55 words, you'll enjoy it :)

6 comments:

  1. Oooooh, nice! Very creative.

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  2. @D: i tried...n im happy!hehe

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  3. Well if Om bhur...works I will be chanting a lot of that now..:)
    Thumbs up for ur story.

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  4. @chrysalis: well, the gayatri mantra was specifically for 'that' ghost!
    soo...donno if it would work everywhere :)

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  5. Anonymous4/01/2009

    Scary :( but creative :)

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Your sweetness makes my day. Gentle criticism will be taken in the right spirit too :)